The widespread use of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web? What solutions can you suggest?
In recent years, the Internet has gained popularity and prevalence among users worldwide. It is sometimes argued that it brings numerous significant disadvantages. This phenomenon happens due to several reasons and societies as well as individuals need to be taken to mitigate it.
Some reasons can explain why the widespread use of the Internet poses considerable threats to humans, especially youngsters. The first reason is due to the speed of development of technological devices. To be more specific, people spend prolonged time on being glued to electronic devices like smartphones, laptops and social networking sites such as Google, Facebook, Instagram, Twitter and so on. This leads to the fact that they become lazy and inactive. For instance, these days, students rely too much on the Internet to find assignments instead of self-thinking. In addition, It has various severe risks related to health like mental disorders, sleep deprivation, heart disease, obesity, and others. For example, adolescents are suffering from Fear of missing out (FOMO) which puts them into addiction. This results in their performance and attitude in class. More significantly, their sedentary lifestyle has detrimental impacts in the coming years. Therefore, the utilization of technology widely has brought challenges to society.
However, practical methods need to be taken to deal with this problem from both the authorities and individuals. One good idea is that the governments should set up workshops about educating humans on using the Internet properly and warning them against the demerits of the Internet. By doing this, humans raise awareness about it. Besides, they need to impose laws and regulations on the use of the Internet in suitable times and places. On top of that, individuals also need to raise take advantage of the benefits of technology wisely and self-control strictly to use social online networking. More specifically, parents should monitor the online hour of children and encourage them to engage in outdoor activities rather than staying at home and standing in front of the computer screen. As a result, some feasible solutions can help to address this phenomenon.
In conclusion, although the Internet has a variety of problems for society, there are several solutions to cope with this issue. Thus, residents need to make use of the advantages and get rid of the shortcomings of the Internet wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2050.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38057742782 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96752561557 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619422572178 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7201952048 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1818181818 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3181818182 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158382868933 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409760609205 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478056176569 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100099483447 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634623861013 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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