The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the way rainwater is collected and reused for various purposes.
Overall, the process begins with rainwater falls to the ground and ends with sending it via drains to the river.
When the rain falls, it increases the level of water in the dam and starts streaming for a period. At the next stage, the rain pumped from the barrier is treated by the treatment plant to make it drinkable. The purified water then is released to the house for consumption while the wastewater is sent back to the treatment plant so that people can reuse it. The excess treated water, on the contrary, is piped back into the river.
The rainwater that runs from the rooftop of the house is also stored in a tank next to the habitation and used for household purposes. Meanwhile, surface water in the form of stormwater is preserved and made to flow directly into waterways.
- The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- More and more city workers are deciding to live in the country and travel to work every day The result is increased traffic congestion and damage to the environment What measures do you think could be taken to encourage people not to travel such long dist 41
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 79
- The figure shows the results of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries The participants were asked at what age they believed certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people Summarise the information by selecting and 61
- As languages such as English Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken there is a fear that many minority languages may die out Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages What is your view of this practice 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ontrary, is piped back into the river. The rainwater that runs from the rooftop of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70779220779 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49168798678 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1917954242 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.625 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0786922960328 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353402564907 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445555804438 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593116186428 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497650123616 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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