The family has a great influence on children’s development, but the influence outside the home plays a bigger part in children’s life. Do you agree or disagree?
It is no doubt to say that the young generation will soon become the pillar of society, thus, educating children plays a fundamental role in the development of a country. Regarding this subject, some people are concerned that the impacts of the external world might outweigh the function of the family. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this argument as I believe that children’s personalities and behavior are the reflections of their parents and it will be harder for them to pursue their dream without parental guidance.
To commence with, from birth through maturity, parents' behavior has a profound meaning in their children’s lives. In other words, children usually have the tendency to imitate their parent’s conduct since they are the closest people to their children. For instance, if a child is raised in an environment where their parents frequently argue, they are more likely to lose their temper and often cause conflict with others. As a result, the knowledge and experiences they gain from the outside world is still insufficient to alleviate the early consequences. This phenomenon is also the major reason for launching anti-social paths in children nowadays. In contrast, when children are raised by well-mannered parents, they will have more chances to have the same quality as their parents.
Furthermore, it is easier for a child to succeed when they can receive the proper guidance from their parents. During adolescence, many children fall into the disorientation stage, which makes them unable to determine their future careers. With the parent's guidance, they will have a clearer direction and have a more stable future. However, if their parents are conservative, it will be difficult for them to show their perspectives as well as pursuing their goals.
To sum up, external factors cannot be seen as superior towards parents' influence. In order to fully develop a child’s potential, parents need to be good role models and have an active attitude when it comes to children’s problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...etermine their future careers. With the parents guidance, they will have a clearer dire...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, still, thus, well, for instance, in contrast, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23241590214 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83893528202 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562691131498 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5273916233 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.066666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108013348571 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434894108757 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406584359024 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733183737816 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331126122928 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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