Nowadays, child labour has become a major concern. Why it is so? What can ve done to solve this problem?
In this ever-changing modern world, the issue of child labour has provoked heated controversy. Indeed, child exploitation is still happening on a massive scale in both developed and developing countries. In this essay, I will discuss main causes of child labour and put forward some possible solutions.
It is generally accepted that putting children to work is attributable to two following reasons. The main driver behind child labour is widely held view it as learning life skills. Many parents, for instance, claim that children play a substantial role in rural economy through building houses, fishing, preparing food and so on. Those with good life skills are more likely to become autonomous and resilient because they can support themselves against all odds. Another contributor to child labour is the high rate of poverty and unemployment. What I mean is that most jobless adults rely on their working children, who are considered strong and dynamic, to improve the chances of attaining basic necessities. They are truly the main source of income in their family .
Dealing with this problem involves both government and individual citizens. A resolution for stopping child labour is for the government to pay urgent attention towards backward areas. Providing a loan for needed people, who is unemployed or incompetent to do work, offers them various opportunities for job and living conditions, which may eradicate child labour. Moreover, the way forward might be to provide free or affordable education. This is achieved mainly through a strict implementation of child labour and education laws as well as an inducement to a shift in parental perceptions about devastating effects of putting children to work.
To sum up, from what have been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that child labour is due to regressive norms for children working and rising level of destitution and joblessness. This problem could be addressed by providing great care to the poor and offering affordable education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, for instance, i mean, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3625 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88157783921 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646875 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0035003001 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.941176471 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214072792219 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642223485308 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405619405465 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13036039059 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151494975849 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.