Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To What extend do you agree or disagree?
During the ages people had to work hard for living. As time passed, human reach many goals to decrease the number of severe diseases which killed people in the past and scientists find new treatments for many illnesses. As a result people can live longer today. This is disagreed that people should retire later since they live longer. This will be proven by analyzing that young people need job opportunities that are available as soon as a person retired. In addition when people get old it is difficult for them to concentrate well on their work.
Having a suitable job is an important aspect o...
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