The internet and technology, like mobile phones and laptops, are connecting us to each other every hour of the day via networking sites and applications. Do you think it’s an advantage or disadvantage?
Explain your answer. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
These days, people are interacting with each other by the use of internet and technologies such as mobiles and laptops throughout the whole day. It has become easy to connect with whole world by just clicking fingers on digital devices. However, it also cause emptiness in families despite being living together under one roof.
To commence with, due to the recent advancements in technology and connecting
devices, it brings whole world together under single platform. Loved ones who are living far away from could feel connected with near or dear ones with the help of cellphones and laptops. Moreover, it also ease working conditions of businessmen who want to do business with foreigners, through online sites or video conferencing. Nowadays, for instance, about 70% of younger generation is browsing networking sites like facebook, WhatsApp and Instagram for voice or facetime internationally. As a result, there is certainly great number of benefits of digital technology.
In contrast, it is undeniable that it really helpful in bringing individuals together globally, but, it affect the bond among familes and friends who are living closely. Because, everyone is so busy in their online world that could not even some spend some time with own families results in loss of real relationships. For example, about 65% under age 30s engrossed in imaginary world of devices using various networking sites, forgetting the real value of physical attachment
and friendship. Thus, elder generations feel left out due to the ignorance of their own technology addicted children.
To conclude, with every passing hour, hundreds of unknown people connecting with help of internet and technology. I moderately agree with the notion that mobiles and laptops via networking apps bring people close. Howevere, it does cause detrimental affect, because of online sites many people ignoring real world and their real beautiful relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, thus, even so, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43377483444 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83264356514 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622516556291 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.466365006 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144370225806 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505033721191 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594856806846 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770137469672 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458612021015 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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