Due to development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of the local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
This is a fact that due to globalization and industrialization, some companies are expanding gradually that could take over the small businesses. While I am completely agree with this trend that local communities may die with shutting down the tiny businesses, some protection should be provided to the local businesses.
On the one hand, There are many potential reasons of why large companies are accountable for the dissolution of local businesses. Firstly, In today’s materialistic world buying habits of people has changed as people love to buy branded products, that indicates their status among other people in the society aa well as quality is better than the local cheaper products. Therefore, spending more money to purchase items from the supermarkets leads to the progress of supermarkets and closure of local shops. Secondly, price concessions are being provided by the supermarkets and big stores such as discount on large quantity, cash discount, guarantees and warrantee and the after sale services which attracts the customers towards them. Therefore, demand for better quality products is being increased instead of local products. Finally, Supermarkets has be widened and capable of providing every item under one roof as customers can buy everything at one location rather than finding different things out from other locations. Hence , convenience must be at top for the end users for the best shopping experience to them.
On the other hand, closing off local business are down to the expansion of large entrepreneurs because of various reasons. First of all, A big amount of finance is required for opening up a new business in fact finance is the backbone of the business during entire life span as business needs to spend first in order to earn in later. So, micro businesses are not able to compete with the macro businesses pertaining to lack of financial resources. In addition to this, if any store have a tendency to provide quality products them consumer will go back to that store; however, the small business can not provide the costly and higher quality products. As a consequent, they are at the verge of death. Apart from this, local business do not have only less variety of products but also they are unable to contribute in the social welfare that is an important reason of closing down of these businesses.
Whereas, authorities should support the local business by allocating businesses loans so that they can survive instead of being fully unemployed that will also give whole wealth to large businesses.
To conclude, Although supermarkets are growing and providing wide rage of services to meet the needs of customers yet i believe that local businesses should be saved for the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 445.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16179775281 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82632634594 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543820224719 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3424660577 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.117647059 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1764705882 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1764705882 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290326733372 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915704552822 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492924224593 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157877543575 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358865369384 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.