Due to development and rapid expansion supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Globalization and industrialization have brought immense changes in the market. With the drastic increase in the number of hypermarkets all across western countries, some believe that small business owners are unable to match their prices and are shutting shops as a result. I, however, opine that this change has provided us with immense benefits which far outweigh the negative impacts. This essay will discuss the aforementioned topic along with examples and supporting arguments.
Clearly, the development of such shops and outlets has changed the buying experience for the customers, wherein, they are pampered with amazing choices and comfort, at the same time providing a better price as compared to the neighbourhood shops. Although this hampers the revenue of small businesses, it enriches the consumers with a plethora of buying options. For example, as per a recent study conducted by a major market researcher, big city hypermarkets, on an average store 10 times higher number of product options as compared to small retail stores with at least 20% reduction in prices. With significantly ample variants, consumers are hugely benefited from such development and change.
Besides, even a mall community of business owners who are not focused on retail can gain immensely from the said shift. In addition to their traditional business model, they can always team-up and collaborate with these big stores to display their product instead of treating them as competition. For instance, local manufacturers of cold-pressed oils who sell only to local customers can team-up and approach procurement executives of these chains to get their oils displayed and sold under a single brand name. If the quality product is provided, the marketing channel and growth opportunities provided by these big chains are vast.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree that local communities are dying out due to the rapid increase and development of branded supermarkets. Albeit smaller retail stores face stiff competition, a healthy competitive challenge should be always acknowledged with a positive sentiment and a zeal to get better at every front.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45345345345 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97889421559 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618618618619 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.903695716 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.714285714 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12585865451 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423480002342 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524706682511 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750773206645 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275363886216 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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