In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this
At present the more opportunities are in cities, as a consecequences of that people are migrating to town. it is not possible to full fill everyone housing need in municipal area also tease days metros has become more congested place to stay. Therfore the free sapce availabe only area in countrside to construct. this eassy will discuss about the impact of building moving to non-urban areas. however, my prespective on this is totaly not in a favour of moving such near by from cities.
To start with, housing is a basic need as well as everyone dream for his own house. Not only the urban places are already jam-packed but also challenging to find land for inhabiatait. For instance, constructing a building requrie land, after that area can not be used for cultivation. As a result, occouping such area will lead to the scarcity of meal additionaly hike in prices for bread and butter.
In addition to this, food industry will be impacted as well as decrease in job related to this, along with price high price for some of the cuisine. On top of that, it has been observed dsitrotion in their local culture, occoupition and daily life. apart form this there will be deforastration to acccomodate new construction near by area, which affect the environment also.
To conclude with, definatily there adverse impact on farming, cropland, ecosystem, local resident lifestyle, cutting trees for lodging. however, shelter building can be shifiting to the places like non agriculture land. Over and above, we can not create new landscape for croping but we can utilize the uncultivated area for raising apartments.
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- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as sahara desert or the antarctic What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places 89
- In many places new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there What is your opinion about this 67
- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the antarctic What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, to start with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02592592593 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80380155414 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.591050342 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.4666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185345973353 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594258963074 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314774254578 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110161236411 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168566371887 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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