People should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the reason for which the statement may or may not be true and explain how these consideration shape your position.
In modern history, one will noticed that major changes are to be occur because of Questioning the authority. Questioning of rules of authority are necessity of changes within an established institution. I partially agree with given statement suggest that, people should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
Take an example formation of United states of america, for years under British rule citizens were are unfailrly taxed and treated according to british rule. Not an single person came and stood up against the british law for an independant entity. Later several years, when released from british law, they made an independant entity United state which differ from british law. This questioning authority not only changes sociological but also an future event.
In certain situation, people claim that questioning authority might be leads to violent action. so best example about claim, Mahatmata Gandhi who as question to authority may not only inspired to other but also inspired them to affect social changes via non violent protest.Considering the ideal example, people now days follow an same theory to questioning authority without any non violent action.
In opposite view, questioning authority may leads to digress, hindrance of progress which something harmul to society. When citizen independantly elect their leader, one can mind set that these official are elected to service the need of contituents as whole. In an system, every person question each new rule, political leaders must cater to many different view point, hindering the process. Because several
question from society, their may lagging in authority rules which leads society's future hampered.
In an considering several situation, one have both view whenever the thing going in certain different way so society have firm to question the authority because after all, it totally lead to future of an society. on other hand, one can't regret when political leaders leads society, so he may have thought which leads to improvement of society, so people were look thoroughly and then ask question, because it unnecessarily,
hindrance progress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'notice'
Suggestion: notice
In modern history, one will noticed that major changes are to be occur beca...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... treated according to british rule. Not an single person came and stood up against...
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Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... not only changes sociological but also an future event. In certain situation, ...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ority might be leads to violent action. so best example about claim, Mahatmata Gan...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'so the best'.
Suggestion: so the best
...ority might be leads to violent action. so best example about claim, Mahatmata Gandhi w...
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Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Considering
... social changes via non violent protest.Considering the ideal example, people now days foll...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e ideal example, people now days follow an same theory to questioning authority wi...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this official' or 'these officials'?
Suggestion: this official; these officials
...ect their leader, one can mind set that these official are elected to service the need of cont...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ce the need of contituents as whole. In an system, every person question each new ...
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Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...w rule, political leaders must cater to many different view point, hindering the process. Beca...
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Line 7, column 402, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'several questions'.
Suggestion: several questions
...w point, hindering the process. Because several question from society, their may lagging in auth...
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Line 7, column 409, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., hindering the process. Because several question from society, their may lagging...
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Line 10, column 4, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...h leads societys future hampered. In an considering several situation, one have...
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Line 10, column 19, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'several situations'.
Suggestion: several situations
...s future hampered. In an considering several situation, one have both view whenever the thing ...
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Line 10, column 184, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...authority because after all, it totally lead to future of an society. on other hand,...
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Line 10, column 202, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...after all, it totally lead to future of an society. on other hand, one cant regret...
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Line 10, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...t totally lead to future of an society. on other hand, one cant regret when politi...
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Line 10, column 233, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...uture of an society. on other hand, one cant regret when political leaders leads soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46428571429 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75538022447 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2887472929 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.4 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176875214737 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746455695861 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695403124299 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108321272982 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565512828399 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'notice'
Suggestion: notice
In modern history, one will noticed that major changes are to be occur beca...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... treated according to british rule. Not an single person came and stood up against...
^^
Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... not only changes sociological but also an future event. In certain situation, ...
^^
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ority might be leads to violent action. so best example about claim, Mahatmata Gan...
^^
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'so the best'.
Suggestion: so the best
...ority might be leads to violent action. so best example about claim, Mahatmata Gandhi w...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Considering
... social changes via non violent protest.Considering the ideal example, people now days foll...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e ideal example, people now days follow an same theory to questioning authority wi...
^^
Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this official' or 'these officials'?
Suggestion: this official; these officials
...ect their leader, one can mind set that these official are elected to service the need of cont...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ce the need of contituents as whole. In an system, every person question each new ...
^^
Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...w rule, political leaders must cater to many different view point, hindering the process. Beca...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 402, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun question seems to be countable; consider using: 'several questions'.
Suggestion: several questions
...w point, hindering the process. Because several question from society, their may lagging in auth...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 409, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., hindering the process. Because several question from society, their may lagging...
^^^
Line 10, column 4, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...h leads societys future hampered. In an considering several situation, one have...
^^
Line 10, column 19, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'several situations'.
Suggestion: several situations
...s future hampered. In an considering several situation, one have both view whenever the thing ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 184, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...authority because after all, it totally lead to future of an society. on other hand,...
^^^^
Line 10, column 202, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...after all, it totally lead to future of an society. on other hand, one cant regret...
^^
Line 10, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...t totally lead to future of an society. on other hand, one cant regret when politi...
^^
Line 10, column 233, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...uture of an society. on other hand, one cant regret when political leaders leads soc...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46428571429 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75538022447 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2887472929 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.4 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176875214737 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746455695861 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695403124299 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108321272982 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565512828399 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.