Advertisement of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So, the advertisements to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree ?
In the techno-savvy era, the ads are playing crucial roles for the choices of the youngsters. These days, the promotional activities for junk food and games have a great influence on the kids as well as on their guardians, so the companies should stop making these kinds of advertisements. This essay will discuss why it is entirely necessary for the government to banned this types of promotions to prevent the wastage of money and time, also to prevent the folks from health issues.
To begin with, the companies use the attractive things to attract the children and the parents, and they sometimes convince themselves to buy those products which may not be important or necessary, so this will waste the money as well as the pace too. For example, if a company is launching a new game called "educational game" and they use some false information to attract the user, then the parents will buy that game, but after that, they will find it useless, ultimately it will waste their wealth and time too. So, these activities should be banned to secure wealth for future use.
Moreover, the advertisements for snacks make the public to feel that this is delicious and healthy foodstuff, but no one can give the guarantee of nutritions. For instance, these days, the chips called "Misvickies Sea Salt" is selling in the market and the companies are promoting it by showing as healthy cuisine and full of nutrition,but in actual, it is very salty and not good for health, because the extreme quantity of salt in feed makes anyone unhealthy. These are a few reasons behind the fact that the lawmaker should have to ban the ads for the safety of the teenagers and their parents.
To conclude, this essay discussed why advertisements should be banned. I absolutely agree with the statement that for the bright future of the national makers , these promotional activities have to stop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93769470405 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83541733277 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554517133956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4790333636 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.090909091 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172807046973 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754387057166 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555313051746 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108076009112 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02776264712 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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