Success is often measured by wealth and material possessions. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?
Wealth and material belongings are frequently considered as measurements of success. This essay will propound the reasons why wealth is not a good indicator of success. In my opinion, personal traits such as self-confidence and perseverance are some of the main factors leading to success.
I believe wealth cannot determine whether a person is successful or not as true success lies in finding happiness and inner peace. In my opinion, the most successful person is the happiest person because the ultimate objective of all human beings is to be happy. Also, it is possible for a person to come to a lot of money without doing anything to earn it. For example, they could have inherited the money or they could have won a lottery. In either case, their wealth cannot be considered as an indication of their success. They are plain lucky, not successful.
As for the factors that make a person successful, they have more to do with a person’s character traits than their bank balance. Self-confidence and self-discipline, for example, are two qualities indispensable for success. People should have faith in their ability and they must be willing to work hard to achieve their goals. Success will be elusive for someone who lacks these personality traits.
To sum up everything that has been stated, in my opinion wealth is not the only yardstick to measure success because there are better criteria. A person should be considered successful if they are happy and at peace with themselves. Positive personality traits such as self-confidence, self-discipline and perseverance are some of the factors leading to success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as for, for example, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13157894737 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04663704541 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53007518797 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3980353995 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.3125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352753565888 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135300194401 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106372393965 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256086415086 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859312056052 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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