Full-time university students should spend a lot of time in studying, but it is essential to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that it is crucial for tertiary students to join in other activities besides studying. In my opinion, I totally agree with this opinion because they bring students more social contacts and contribute to student's future jobs.
The first reason that I agree extra activities are important to college students is because students can find more social relationships. This is because students can meet a lot of new friends who have the same passion and major, they will have a chance to make more friends in order to be supported in studying. For example, a vast majority of students tend to participate in various clubs in universities since these places are the most ideal for students to expand their relationship that can help them in learning.
Another reason why I agree the opinion that extracurricular are imperative is due to the fact that they play an important role in a student's career prospects. Since students join in other activities, they can gain more social skills such as team-working or leading skills in order to impress recruiters in the future. For instance, university students in this are joining many Model United Nations in order for having a prestigious certification in their profile, giving them a better chance in finding a good job.
In conclusion, I absolutely agree curricular activities are indispensable for undergraduates. This is because joining in other activities help university students in having more relationships and provide them a better chance in finding a job. From my perspective, there will be more and more students taking part in new activities instead of only focusing on studying.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...act that they play an important role in a students career prospects. Since students join i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16728624535 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96411468587 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501858736059 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2767012033 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.363636364 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163644796721 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780482737132 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248358904953 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119575442344 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258341597029 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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