Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Making good decisions is one of the most important part of life. It is essential because lousy choices can make the life hell. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that individuals after 18 can do whatever they want and parents should not worry about them, whereas, others hold different perspective. No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of everything. I personally, though believe that young people must ask their parents before taking any decision. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, when the children become young that does not means the responsibilities of parents are ended. In past parents know their resposibilities. It is necessary to look on the issues of the young child although they are smart but do not know much about people and world. They can recognize the difference between right and wrong but the experience about life is zero as compared to old people or parents. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personl experience. To exemplify, when I graduated from high school, my age was 18 years and I decided to get married. Then my parents explains us things to me and my boyfriend that first we have to make our career and till graduation, we can arrange a event for your engagement. Now, thanks to my parents for guiding us at times when we are about to made a wrong choice of whole life. Therefore, this experience taught me that try to take some advise before deciding.
Secondly, the world is getting advance and our new generation is way different from ours they like to take their decisions without even telling parents, which is not good. Now life is busy even parents do not have time for children. For instance, when I was in school one of my friend is very upset. Her parents run a huge business , because of lack of time they do not pay attention on their young daughter. One day she did not ask her parents and went for long tour with her boy friend as she was young she do not know what is going on in world and unfortunately she choose wrong destination and wrong person. As a result, she had to suffered a lot. Thus, this example classifies the importance of asking for parents decisions.
In light of reasons mentioned, I strongly agree agree with the statement that young generation no matter how they are grown must ask their parents before making any big decisions of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 788, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eer and till graduation, we can arrange a event for your engagement. Now, thanks ...
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Line 2, column 982, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
...erience taught me that try to take some advise before deciding. Secondly, the world ...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y upset. Her parents run a huge business , because of lack of time they do not pay...
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Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...ith her boy friend as she was young she do not know what is going on in world and ...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
...going on in world and unfortunately she choose wrong destination and wrong person. As ...
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Line 3, column 577, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to wrong'
Suggestion: to wrong
...n in world and unfortunately she choose wrong destination and wrong person. As a resu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: agree
... light of reasons mentioned, I strongly agree agree with the statement that young generatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63656884876 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55981126546 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530474040632 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6118185197 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3043478261 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2608695652 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.39130434783 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288573613012 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791992709772 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648655131645 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196622452481 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452258979508 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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