Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “People should keep trying to reach their goals even if they seem impossible to achieve.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Nowadays, people tend to feel that it is impossible to do everything. Mostly because adult people inculcate children not to derail from social customs. It means that adults deprive their children of the opportunity even though they have it.I personally believe that keeping trying to achieve something is an important thing rather than giving up. I have three reasons, which I will explain in the following essay,
First, successful people have faced a great deal of predicaments and failure so far. Trying hard in order to accomplish something always has positive aspects for people, because when they face difficulties, they want to overwhelm them. At the same time, people can get new experience. However, if people stop doing something at that time, they cannot get anything from their predicaments; they only get the experience of failure. According to one book, more than 99% of people give up on their dreams because they appear to be impossible.On the other hand, one percent of people who do not give up on their dreams succeed.
Second, human beings always like improvement in all areas, such as technology and science because our life is much more convenient and easier. As a result, people can give up more easily than in the past. In the past, people had to survive in a harsh environment and contrive new things every day. I strongly believe that these people living in such eras did not give up easily. In this perspective, trying hard without considering the possibility of making mistakes can get a result and feel like an achievement like an ancestor.
On a final note, successful people always try hard to achieve something without worrying about failure, and our ancestors also did not give up anything. In this precedent, I think trying hard without thinking about the possibility is engendering positive effects for people. Therefore, I absolutely agree that people should keep trying even though it seems impossible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, i think, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07165109034 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68758716614 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563862928349 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4838453823 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22992926014 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786241076098 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635238557198 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146443190518 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546506613883 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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