The following appeared in the Health section of the Greenhorne Gazette.
"Motilac is a substance that occurs naturally in the human digestive tract. Many consumers of dietary supplements containing motilac report significant easing of digestive discomfort after just a few weeks of use. Among Greenhorne residents, the consumption of motilac supplements has increased 80% over the last seven years. Last year, Greenhorne’s five hospitals reported fewer cases of serious gastrointestinal disorders than any year on record. Meanwhile, sales of motilac supplements are declining in the neighboring town of Etolin. Notably, hospitals in Etolin report a steady increase in the last two years in patients experiencing a wide range of distressing gastrointestinal symptoms. The clear explanation of these trends is that motilac is effective in preventing many serious gastrointestinal disorders."
Write a response in which you discuss one or more alternative explanations that could rival the proposed explanation and explain how your explanation(s) can plausibly account for the facts presented in the argument.
The health section of the Greenhorne Gazette states that motilac is effective in preventing serious gastrointestinal disorders by summation of Greenhorne residents with neighboring town of Etolin. They state that consumption of motilac supplements has increased 80 % over the last seven years in Greenhorne and concluded fewer reported cases of serious gastrointestinal disorders in five hospitals in last year; whereas, with the decrease in sales of motilac supplements in Etolin has resulted in increase in patients suffering from gastrointestinal symptoms. The argument seems plausible in the very beginning but at close scrutiny, the argument is full of unwarranted assumptions which are stated below.
First of all, the argument refers motilac is a substance that occurs naturally in the human digestive tract but fails to include why it is to be supplied as a dietary supplement although it is generated in the human digestive tract. The argument fails to include at what amount does motilac produce in human digestive tract and what amount does it require to ease digestive discomfort. It is possible that motilac a great misconception which reduces digestive problem when included as dietary supplements. Although, motilac is produced inside human digestive tract; there are various enzymes along with motilac produced by digestive tract which helps in digestion of food. It is specious to assume that consumers which include motilac in their dietary supplements actually reduces dietary problems.
Secondly, the argument states the consumption of motilac has increased 80% over the last seven years. However, it fails to provide any relevant data regarding consumption of motilac has increased 80 % in total or each year. Similarly, the argument co relates the increase in consumption over last seven years with the decrease in patients of gastrointestinal disorders of five hospitals of Greenhorne’s areas. It is likely that the patients of gastro intestinal disorders has increased in all other hospitals except five hospitals which the argument has taken too and argument has failed to include.
Thirdly, the arguer has presented that the people suffering from gastro intestinal disorders decreases only from the last year although the consumption rate of motilac has increased over 80 percent in last seven years. It is prejudiced to assume the effects of motilac has only seen from last year. It is possible that people of Greenhorne has become health consciousness and avoid bulky and fast foods to be safe from intestinal disorder. It is likely that they may have other reasons to consume motilac other than to prevent from disorders.
Moreover, the arguer compares Greenhorne with Etolin and states the decrease in patients with increase in motilac consumption in Greenhorne whereas in Etolin, the patients suffering from gastro intestinal disorder increases with the decrease in motilac consumption. It is foolhardy to compare of two different areas citing a common example. It is possible that the environmental conditions of Greenhorne is cold type and body can digest any food material whereas the temperature of Etolin is high and it is hard for human body to digest food. It is possible that the people of Greenhorne are very conscious with their health conditions and strictly prohibited to assume outside food resulting in decrease in stomach disorder patients. While people of Etolin are unknown about their health status and fond of having street foods full of oily and species which may be the major cause of digestive tract disorder.
In conclusion, the argument as it stands now is full of unwarranted assumptions. To make argument valid, it should be supported with valid examples and reasoning responding motilac actually helps in mitigating digestive tract infections.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 619, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'scrutiny'.
Suggestion: scrutiny
... plausible in the very beginning but at close scrutiny, the argument is full of unwarranted as...
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Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'easing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: easing
...e tract and what amount does it require to ease digestive discomfort. It is possible th...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 441, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ds to be safe from intestinal disorder. It is likely that they may have other reas...
^^
Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... is hard for human body to digest food. It is possible that the people of Greenhor...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, while, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 28.8173652695 111% => OK
Preposition: 100.0 55.5748502994 180% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 16.3942115768 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3215.0 2260.96107784 142% => OK
No of words: 594.0 441.139720559 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41245791246 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93681225224 4.56307096286 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93713840571 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 204.123752495 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.402356902357 0.468620217663 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1002.6 705.55239521 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 4.96107784431 242% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3017425521 57.8364921388 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.782608696 119.503703932 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8260869565 23.324526521 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65217391304 5.70786347227 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 6.88822355289 232% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31566416405 0.218282227539 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101391367574 0.0743258471296 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092418035708 0.0701772020484 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159435907882 0.128457276422 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122132552085 0.0628817314937 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.3799401198 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.3550499002 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.5979740519 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 98.500998004 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 619, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'scrutiny'.
Suggestion: scrutiny
... plausible in the very beginning but at close scrutiny, the argument is full of unwarranted as...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'easing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: easing
...e tract and what amount does it require to ease digestive discomfort. It is possible th...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 441, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ds to be safe from intestinal disorder. It is likely that they may have other reas...
^^
Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... is hard for human body to digest food. It is possible that the people of Greenhor...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, while, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 28.8173652695 111% => OK
Preposition: 100.0 55.5748502994 180% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 16.3942115768 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3215.0 2260.96107784 142% => OK
No of words: 594.0 441.139720559 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41245791246 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93681225224 4.56307096286 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93713840571 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 204.123752495 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.402356902357 0.468620217663 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1002.6 705.55239521 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 4.96107784431 242% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3017425521 57.8364921388 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.782608696 119.503703932 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8260869565 23.324526521 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65217391304 5.70786347227 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 6.88822355289 232% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31566416405 0.218282227539 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101391367574 0.0743258471296 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092418035708 0.0701772020484 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159435907882 0.128457276422 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122132552085 0.0628817314937 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.3799401198 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.3550499002 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.5979740519 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 98.500998004 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.