The process below shows how drinking water is made using solar power. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below.
The picture illustrates that is making use of solar power converted into the drinking water for present-day.
Overall, it can be seen that solar energy is renewable power which they can utilize to turning out to safe water fit for people who are using it. Meanwhile, there are several steps involving in the making of final products.
Starting the absorb sunlight from the sky, the solar controller is storing heat. After generating electricity and will be pumping the water out where it is in underground water. Following this step, water is transferred into the water filter, and it then are containing into the large water tank which is put into a wooden platform.
In other stages, the drinkable water is initial holding on the tank, a pipe is underneath of its where will be along with the portable water are taken out the movable container which is attached the tap. Finally, water had been taken into serving to people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...the making of final products. Starting the absorb sunlight from the sky, the solar contro...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...rred into the water filter, and it then are containing into the large water tank wh...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...rred into the water filter, and it then are containing into the large water tank which is put ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86163522013 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47800338404 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610062893082 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2141753145 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164212498793 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07620383281 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657132190128 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121520027159 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063266357901 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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