The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
To prepare young folks for leadership in any field can be done by imbibing them with cooperation. competition is a great way to grow as it pushes us to our limits and helps us outgrow ourselves but to lead people we need to view them as a team and not a competition and hence we need to cooperate to become a great leader. A good leader is one who fosters growth in every member of their team.
cooperation is the essence of a team. it brings out the best in everyone while not making them insecure of other people in the team. When we think of a leader an image of a humble person loved by everyone pops up. For example, Abraham Lincoln emancipated blacks from slavery. he did that because he wanted everyone to be equal and cooperate to make the country better. A sense of competition would not have allowed him to take such drastic steps.
Furthermore, empathy is what makes a true leader. If a person can see from other's point of view and understand the situation, they can solve it better. this sense of collaboration on a mental level is a must for a leader. A collaborative effort will more often than not take the team to greater heights. A sense of competition within the team will always bog the team down and will lead to internal conflicts. it might lead to everyone trying to give themselves more importance than necessary and fostering an environment where more frenemies are born than leaders.
In contrast, it is true that competition aids in development in any field, not just leadership. we are able to become a better self of us but like it is said this deal is too good to be true, most of the time. it is usually difficult for people to consider someone a leader, who they consider to be a competition. leaders born out of competition will never be able to think about their team above themselves which is not what a leader should be like.
In conclusion, a sense of cooperation and competition are qualities a person should possess but for leading in any field they need to be cooperative with everyone, be it their team, management, or any other people connected to them. cooperation will always go a long way for people working in a team. they will be able to better foster productive growth helping everyone around them and being a true leader.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Competition
...done by imbibing them with cooperation. competition is a great way to grow as it pushes us ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cooperation
...n every member of their team. cooperation is the essence of a team. it brings out...
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Line 6, column 39, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... cooperation is the essence of a team. it brings out the best in everyone while n...
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Line 6, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...m insecure of other people in the team. When we think of a leader an image of a humb...
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Line 6, column 277, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...incoln emancipated blacks from slavery. he did that because he wanted everyone to ...
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Line 11, column 145, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...rstand the situation, they can solve it better. this sense of collaboration on a menta...
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Line 11, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...he situation, they can solve it better. this sense of collaboration on a mental leve...
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Line 11, column 411, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...wn and will lead to internal conflicts. it might lead to everyone trying to give t...
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Line 16, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ment in any field, not just leadership. we are able to become a better self of us ...
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Line 16, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... too good to be true, most of the time. it is usually difficult for people to cons...
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Line 16, column 315, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Leaders
... who they consider to be a competition. leaders born out of competition will never be a...
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Line 21, column 234, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cooperation
... or any other people connected to them. cooperation will always go a long way for people wo...
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Line 21, column 302, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... long way for people working in a team. they will be able to better foster productiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59708737864 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67540034206 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473300970874 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5480618093 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0909090909 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13636363636 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185887143298 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605230262264 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05740712797 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118473404919 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439335638501 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.