The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995- 2002.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995- 2002.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the total amount of time by minutes (in billion) of phone calls in Britain from 1995 to 2002, according to three types: Local - fixed line, National and international - fixed line, Mobiles (all calls). The general overview is that Mobiles was always surpassed by two others in the amount of call time.

To specify, the number of minutes of Mobiles calls went up slightly from 2 billion in 1995 to 13 billion in 1999, before a significant increase to 35 billion in 2002. Similarly, the amount of time spent on National and international - fixed line climbed gradually from...

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