Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people tend to spend their whole life dedicated to only one company. Others, however, say that looking for barriers organizations is a better choice. In this essay, I'm going to analyze both opinions before stating my perspective.
On the one hand, being loyal to one corporation has several benefits. First of all, permanently working at one agency might offer employees promising career prospects since there are several rules of jobs that require full-time working and loyalty with the company what career opportunities for promoting. To illustrate, waiters in restaurants or hotels often need both a year-time, hard-working and committed to the institution to become a manager or higher positions. However, spending the whole life doing one job is boring and unmotivated if a person signed in for a job permanently, there would be a huge regret and disappointment when they found out their job was not suitable for their condition, especially problems with money and salary.
On the other hand, working for a variety of organizations could bring curiosity and motivation for workers. Thanks to the diversity in fields and positions of work, it was employees who could enhance their social and relationships with partners from the company they used to work for. In addition, working in different institutions means they can access enormous learning resources. Nevertheless, labourers might get into trouble if the company's information been leaked outside.
In conclusion, each type of work provide their employee benefits but hard-working and loyalty are the two key characteristics that lead to success at work
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38431372549 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01434223855 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650980392157 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1118695443 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.416666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395209643267 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130550187344 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876124026895 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229090280402 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437773843797 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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