Today, majority of children are raised ny their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family ?
Nowadays, in most families, both father and mother are the breadwinners, so the children have to be raised by their grandparents. This situation affects the family in both positive and negative way that I am going to analyze in this essay.
On the positive side, looking after grandchildren helps to shorten the generation gap between grandparents and them. Grandparents will accompany their kids with a variety of activities such as reading books, learning or even playing games. This leads to the fact that grandparents have more opportunities to make sense of their children’s thinking, which are certainly different from theirs. In some situations, they become children’s closest members to share their secrets. Besides, in comparison with parents, grandparents have more experience in taking care of children. Their preciously previous experience now is used to provide the most complete care to their nephews and nieces. Therefore, the children not only learn knowledge but they are also given many important moral lessons.
On the negative side, it is generally seen that grandparents may be out of love, pamper and spoil the grandchildren. They seem to satisfy all of their wishes, even if the desires sometimes are quite absurd. Children then form several bad instincts which are completely hard to remove. Another disadvantage is that some attitudes of grandparents are not up to date and not suitable to teach children. For example, grandparents always tell children not to make a lies; however, children should make white lies in certain events to avoid hurting other’s feeling. This leads to a problem that grandparents and parents can struggle to harmonize their opinions about how to teach the children in many aspects. In such cases, children are the worst sufferers.
In conclusion, I believe that both grandparents and grandchildren benefit from this situation. Children are raised greatly and grandparents also have more time with them. Besides, the whole family must find ways to eliminate all the negative effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lie' or simply 'lies'?
Suggestion: a lie; lies
...arents always tell children not to make a lies; however, children should make white li...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36956521739 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93693765564 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568322981366 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6977153372 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25939891036 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782910691295 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390471994284 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156719463904 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029211673019 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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