Fir a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world However now a days people s values has changed we tend to consider science technology and business more important than arts What are the problems and solutions to this

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Fir a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, now a days people’s values has changed .we tend to consider science , technology and business more important than arts. What are the problems and solutions to this trend?

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2021-10-08 lakhveer khokhar 84 view
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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From Thousand years ago arts always have played an in...
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...n integral role in forming and nurturing cultures around the world. However, in m...
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...omenon that why people tend more towards science, technology and business than ar...
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...ng ones choose these subjects when they turns from school to colleges or prestigious ...
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...and they have studied about. Secondly, Technology has had changes in lives if p...
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...y has had changes in lives if people in many different ways as it has made everything easier t...
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... schedule if life people prefer to watch television when come back home after wo...
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... life people prefer to watch television when come back home after working hours ...
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...e of science and technology. Finally, If children would study business, then they...
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...ve while other old arts have been hidden because of less appreciation. Most impor...
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...ation. Most importantly, government must provide employment opportunities to peop...
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...t give them hope that higher authorities support art as well as these are the ide...
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...onsidered to be necessary than arts yet i believe that art is far more beneficial...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 450.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15333333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72342286448 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6917974265 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.052631579 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6842105263 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8947368421 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265967964507 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783950981517 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517922685728 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139794002601 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467837370475 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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