Fir a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, now a days people’s values has changed .we tend to consider science , technology and business more important than arts. What are the problems and solutions to this trend?
From Thousand years ago arts always have played an integral role in forming and nurturing cultures around the world. However, in modern world, people pay more attention to science, technology and business. There are certain reasons behind it and solutions would be discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, The phenomenon that why people tend more towards science, technology and business than arts, has several reasons. Firstly, These subjects are more relevant to the field of youngsters in these days as majority of young ones choose these subjects when they turns from school to colleges or prestigious universities for holding degrees or diplomas. Therefore, People try to find profession in the sector they know about and they have studied about.
Secondly, Technology has had changes in lives if people in many different ways as it has made everything easier than before for people. For example, Due to hectic schedule if life people prefer to watch television when come back home after working hours instead of making arts. Hence, people are under the great influence of science and technology. Finally, If children would study business, then they are able to be entered in business sector as without studying business they would face losses in their business can not be employed in reputed companies That is why, These subjects are preferred by students.
On the other hand, Along with distinct reasons, plethora of measures could be taken to promote arts. First of all, some arts are still alive while other old arts have been hidden because of less appreciation. Most importantly, government must provide employment opportunities to people in this field as people move towards lucrative jobs in today’s materialistic world snd want to earn as much money as possible to get all comforts of life. As a result, opening up vistas in this field will encourage people to study arts and pursue if as a profession.
Additionally, Financial support should be provided by government to artists in order to create motivation to make arts as it might give them hope that higher authorities support art as well as these are the identification of a country. Consequently, Arts would be the primary subject such as other important subjects and students will take interest in arts. Last but not least, Arts are not only boost self-confidence, creativity and imagination of children but also make them capable of expressing emotions and feelings. That is why, school staff must motivate students and further it would provide employment to arts teacher.
To conclude, Although science, technology and business are considered to be necessary than arts yet i believe that art is far more beneficial to give useful messages to people thar can not be explained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 450.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15333333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72342286448 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6917974265 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.052631579 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6842105263 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8947368421 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265967964507 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783950981517 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517922685728 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139794002601 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467837370475 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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