In some countries young people have become richer, healthier and live longer, but they are less happy.
What are the causes?
What can be done to address this situation?
Apparently, young people in several nations nowadays are able to lead a healthy and luxurious life. However, for them, these elements seem not to be synonymous with happiness. There are numerous reasons as well as solutions for this.
First, young adults these days are affected by various exterior factors that contribute negatively to their levels of happiness. Indeed, when social media platforms dominate their world, young people can easily be bombarded with a host of instructions to a perfect life. This, however, with a counter-effect, renders them dissatisfied with their ordinary self image. For example, in a recent survey, most of the young girls in the United States have admitted that Instagram makes them feel insecure about their body. Besides, what results in an individual’s satisfaction with life is related to hectic work schedules. It is clearly observed that the young today is required to follow a nine-to-five routine with heavy assignments and deadlines, which spares them little time of relaxation. Consequently, they are likely to burn out and unhappiness is an inevitable aftermath.
Nevertheless, there are also numerous solutions to solve this issue. The first one should be carried out by the person themselves; they must be aware of how detrimental it is to pursue an ideal but vague life existing only on the Internet. Thus, they must learn to restrict the amount of time spent on these platforms, then concentrate on such valuable activities as enrolling in charity organizations or playing sports. In addition, companies and co-operations need to regard their employees’ mental health as top priority. For example, the manager should divide tasks equally among the members so that an enormous amount of workload should not be put on one’s shoulders. As long as the young can strike the work-life balance, it is feasible that they can also maintain happiness.
In conclusion, although young adults may be living healthily without much financial concern, there are still elements hindering happiness in their life, some of which stem from social media and their job’s requirements. Therefore, that people should reduce time invested on the virtual world and companies manage their employees’ workload may help address this problem.
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...workload may help address this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38547486034 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87011682909 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603351955307 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0320365872 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.111111111 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182785790942 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523543125323 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325638822446 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107682944815 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170701111959 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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