Do you think life will be very different in the near future?
The first 20 years of the 21st century have been the most successful era of humankind when people have experienced the significant development of industry and technology. These promising successes have given many scientists an optimistic view of the picture of our lives after a few decades. However, with the rising concern about climate change and escalating tensions among nations, some experts argue that our future would be apocalyptic if those problems cannot be immediately solved. Personally speaking, the picture of our future heavily depends on many factors that both can support and hamper the development of our society.
With the rapid growth of technology, our lifestyle would be much more different. Artificial intelligence will be in proximity of perfection and be capable of completing all tasks that used to be done by humans only. Therefore, AI combined with automatic machines will help labors work in extreme conditions; and workers then will have more spare time with their families in the next few years. What is more, we will be able to witness the next technological breakthrough, which will mark the next milestone of space traveling and transportation. Thanks to the mass production of spaceships and rockets, the cost of traveling will dramatically reduce, and space traveling will be widely commercialized. This whole new step will be the foundation for the next era of humankind in the future when they will set their footstep on the habitable planet and build a new civilization out there. All of these combined have proved to us that technology will become the core field of global industry and bring society to the next level of development.
Besides those optimistic predictions, social development can be severely affected due to escalated conflict between superpowers. Different ideologies and cultures may push the current world into the bloody battleground. Many large countries will use their military power to fight for markets and influence over the global economy. In addition, climate change is currently making numerous irreversible effects on our planet and destroying our nature, which is the most important and only home for us and other species. The alarming rate of these issues has forced international governments to take action to alleviate the situation. What is more, individuals should be responsible for protecting the Earth and creating our planet a better place.
To conclude, although I take a sanguine view on the future of human civilization, tackling social, political, and environmental problems is still the top priority. However, if we can address all of the issues listed above, I ensure that our future world will be a paradise for our children and family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, as for, in addition, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2356.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30630630631 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9494531015 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565315315315 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 742.5 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7431861492 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.888888889 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213085631213 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687001162816 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559762412059 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126533530232 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544718408735 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.