Do you think life will be very different in the near future?
The first 20 years of the 21st century have been the most successful era of humankind when people have experienced the significant development of industry and technology. These promising successes have given many scientists an optimistic view of the picture of our lives after a few decades. However, with the rising concern about climate change and escalating tensions among nations, some experts argue that our future would be apocalyptic if those problems cannot be immediately solved. Personally speaking, the picture of our future heavily depends on many factors that both can support and hamper the development of our society.
With the rapid growth of technology, our lifestyle would be much more different. Artificial intelligence will be in proximity of perfection and be capable of completing all tasks that used to be done by humans only. Therefore, AI combined with automatic machines will help labors work in extreme conditions; and workers then will have more spare time with their families in the next few years. What is more, we will be able to witness the next technological breakthrough, which will mark the next milestone of space traveling and transportation. Thanks to the mass production of spaceships and rockets, the cost of traveling will dramatically reduce, and space traveling will be widely commercialized. This whole new step will be the foundation for the next era of humankind in the future when they will set their footstep on the habitable planet and build a new civilization out there. All of these combined have proved to us that technology will become the core field of global industry and bring society to the next level of development.
Besides those optimistic predictions, social development can be severely affected due to escalated conflict between superpowers. Different ideologies and cultures may push the current world into the bloody battleground. Many large countries will use their military power to fight for markets and influence over the global economy. In addition, climate change is currently making numerous irreversible effects on our planet and destroying our nature, which is the most important and only home for us and other species. The alarming rate of these issues has forced international governments to take action to alleviate the situation. What is more, individuals should be responsible for protecting the Earth and creating our planet a better place.
To conclude, although I take a sanguine view on the future of human civilization, tackling social, political, and environmental problems is still the top priority. However, if we can address all of the issues listed above, I ensure that our future world will be a paradise for our children and family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, as for, in addition, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2298.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28275862069 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94184079602 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0518969754 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.947368421 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8947368421 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196291413969 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617176802099 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485098219606 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113251370548 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548279883458 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.