You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.
What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
In the compemtorary era, human race's bigger problem is could be polution to world.In universe just in the world has a life for humans,animals or plants.But apart from animals and plants just people are disrecpectful to world.
First of all,one is the bigger problem is global warming.The global warming is effecting to all life for now but in the future it will be worst for next generations.This vital problem has a many of reason.But, man-made activities is coming firstly in line.The problem start with industry revolution.With the development in industry people is getting more need to fossil fuels for cars,trains or even homes.After burnt a lot of fossil fuels air pollutions is show up.With the air pollution world sunlight protect layer is starting distort.After this requiretments they need to more space for new manifacturing places.For this goverments com.mence the distort wild forest.When forest is gone by one by one sun light became more directly to world.
Overall,there is still plenty of time for rescue to global life.The goverments should be make regulations for fossil oils, wrong industry adn for the rest of the reasons.The countries be able to reduce the air pollution with using more organic fuel.They can encourage to society for planting a tree or prefere to public transport for reduce to gas emission.Explain to children in school results of the high temperatures what causes.
Eventually,for save the world is not late.However,still there is a lot of thing to fo for taking action.The goverments should work with volunteer people for more green and healthy world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26171875 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2314274575 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 221.21186112 49.4020404114 448% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 336.75 106.682146367 316% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.0 20.7667163134 308% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.25 7.06120827912 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1951904716 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108751339134 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501316055568 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108751339134 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501316055568 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.3 13.0946893788 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.52 50.2224549098 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.