E-mail has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, but this impact has been negative as well as positive.
Do the disadvantages of using email outweigh the advantages?
Nowadays people are more likely to communicate with others online in social media rather than meet face to face. That makes the impact of email on both professional and social interaction has become more significant than ever. While there are certain drawbacks of the spread of email, I believe that the benefits far outweigh all of them.
On the one hand, the development of emailing has led directly to the decline of traditional communication in both schools and offices. By using email, for instance, employees can work from home, therefore, they may disconnect and no longer get on well with their colleagues. In addition, children and teenagers, who need to interact directly with others to stimulate social and communication skills, are witnessed to be timid and lack fundamental life skills. According to a recent survey by UNICEF, during the distant learning period in 2020, when students had to study at home and receive comments online by emails, the number of depressed child-patients rose over 30%. This is such an abominable condition to human interaction.
On the other hand, the advantages that email brings to life can not be denied by any way. Thanks to the evolution of technology, humans have access to the fastest means of interaction. Email is globalized and freely used by everyone. This not only reduces the time waiting but also saves the money spent for letters and meetings. As an example, the free access to email helps avoid the high prices of phone call service, especially for international calls that charge about 5 dollars per month. Furthermore, emails make everything more convenient for business. It only takes a few minutes to send email across any nation all over the world instead of calling or sending letters.
In conclusion, although utilizing email has its own evident downsides, from my perspective, the beneficial sides counterbalance them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...both professional and social interaction has become more significant than ever. W...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17207792208 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83360098974 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662337662338 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8478412525 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196114223629 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575179084925 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436301585371 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101386881265 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514236584627 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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