Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
When students finish high school, they often face the dilemma of whether they should take tertiary education or go straight to work. While some people tend towards the idea that having a job right after high school is beneficial, I would argue that it is much better to have further education.
On the one hand, the option of getting a job straight after school seems to be fascinating for several reasons. Firstly, most teenagers want to earn money as soon as possible, they want to have their own financial demands and do not need to rely on their parents. In this way, they can carry on their own life independently and even start their own family. Moreover, many people think that it is such a waste of time to spend about 4 years in the lecture hall. Life is short, and the university is unworthy. These young people decide to find work to set their own career. By going straight to work, they will have a chance to gain practical experience instead of theory in college, so that they can have more time and opportunities to try different jobs and find their actual interests.
On the other hand, I believe that continuing higher education is the best way to broaden youngster’s horizons and opportunities for a pleasant job. This is because universities and colleges teach students comprehensive knowledge to develop expertise in a particular field. In the universities, students can learn from the bottom up and gain social skills by joining various clubs. Additionally, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive than ever, and most of the best companies require their applicants to have qualifications from prestigious universities for higher position as well as job prosperity. As proof, it is impossible to become a doctor or lawyer without having relevant degrees. As a result, university graduates have access to more well-paid jobs and career prospects.
In conclusion, it appears to me that youngsters are more likely to succeed if they continue higher education before getting a particular job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02662721893 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84342923383 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579881656805 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0393312167 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186561354055 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604295951457 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522206961527 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106927919352 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394337904351 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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