Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people might argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity.
People have different views about the question of whether or not should animals experiments be prohibited. While those who support the idea of developing new medicines through animals experiments have their own good arguments, I believe that these experiments should be stopped as it is morally wrong.
On the one hand, it is justifiable for people to argue that animals experiments should be used because of their benefits. The main reason why this method is the most common one used in developing medicine is its preciseness and effectiveness. At the same time, if we banned this type of experiment it would pose great difficulties in medicine developing procedures that play an important role in curing different diseases for humans. As a result, it could negatively affect the health of humans in general. In other words, animals experiments are necessary for maintaining the well-being of people.
However, I am more convinced that this method should be prohibited as it is unethical. In my opinion, it is wrong to put animals through pain in order to gain benefits for humans. Every creature on the Earth has the right to be respected and treated properly. Every animal deserves to live freely without any suffering instead of being captivated in laboratories for medical experiments. Therefore, people should look for alternative methods to use in developing medicines instead of animals testing which would cause trauma to them.
In summary, although animals testing could be significantly beneficial in developing medicines, I am of the belief that we should ban this method and search for alternative ones.
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- These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work What could be the reasons for this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 61
- Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products Some people might argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer while others are in favor 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
People have different views about the question of whether or not should animals experiments be pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, in general, in summary, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25384615385 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94617393044 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580769230769 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4281816289 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415571418877 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143335000255 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100127391951 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249309999402 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789699800271 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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