Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do. Do you agree or disagree?
In an accelerating pace of globalization these days, human are facing with the variety of challenges to have a happy and comfortable life. Because of that reason, the perception regarding constantly working in the elderly has been prevalent. From my point of view, this issue should be taken into account before a final decision is come to.
On the one hand, perpetually working when getting old is the meaningful and reality notion because individuals all have particular reasons in their life. To commence, the finance problems seemly is the most anxiety around their existence which apart from the family and descendants. Any older people usually accumulate money as much as possible, they could accept a job which have low-earn to cater for damands relating the work and study even the future of all members in family. Another reason could be considerable is the spontaneous action of the elderly by the isolation alone is a signature effortlessly to illustrate for their tedious. Having an unpainstaking job can be the adequate remedy facilitating them to ignore a monotonous life as well as perceive there has lots of stimulating explorations in life.
On the other hand, some drawbacks will appear if the elderly continue to work. First and foremost, the decline of the physical and mental health would become exacerbating without concern about well-being. People work in the these conditions might suffer chronic muscular and joint pain such as lumbago, fibrosis caused by constant sitting and the deficiency in exercise. In addition, the age matter is also a main culprit which trigger the impediment relating their job. The low speed in working will effect on the labour efficiency of company and lots of different matters unexpected occur and hence, the elderly should be cautious during working.
In conclusion, I diametrically agree with the above idea provided that the job have to suitable with their health station of older people. The life will be better and has more colourful and more meaningful if the human are conscious of the balance between affairs and existence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, regarding, so, well, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15588235294 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77650018678 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605882352941 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.586295688 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.866666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122223377178 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373150363205 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433079756129 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654510951141 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304787576248 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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