The spread of multinational companies and the increase of globalization produces positive effects for everyone. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
In current days, the drama development of international companies can have beneficial effects on people around the world. Personally, I can just partly agree with the opinion because of the following reasons.
On the one hand, it is true that people have huge opportunities to access up-to-date information in any life's aspects. For example, Facebook which is the leading frequently popular application in many countries is the most typical instance, thanks to the appearance of Facebook, people can freely share their opinions, characteristics, etc., on the internet and can absorb varied confirmed information in different nations, so people can perfectly learn many unfamiliar traditional and cultural activities through small screens. Moreover, due to the development of international companies, visitors can easily enjoy their favourite meals in lieu of physical distance. If visitors have a journey to unfamiliar nations and they cannot accept national traditional meals, they will have another choice with some familiar brands such as Jollibee, KFC, Star Buck, etc., so this is the most effective method to maintain tourists' desires and visiting experiences.
On the other hand, I reckon that this development can be detrimental to both local people and the government. First of all, an enormous number of local shops are unwantedly closed because of the sharp rise of uncontrollable worldwide businesses, and they cannot have enough facilities and money to directly encounter. Second, in modern society, many worldwide businesses overuse their power to immediately control government and they will not pay tax for their products in any nation. This harmful development can surely make the government lack money for building national amenities and facilities which can totally improve citizens' living conditions.
In conclusion, I reckon that I just partly agree with the statement because local people can have to cease their daily jobs and the government may be uncontrollable with the deficiency of worldwide companies' taxes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 546, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59677419355 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99486379609 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.9054599874 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.727272727 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6363636364 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0547016767553 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0244118796681 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243348690708 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464955554478 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253552000643 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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