It is better for students to study from home rather than going to school. Do you agree or diagree with statement?
In my opinion, I think that homeschooling and school-studying students both have the same advantages and disadvantages. The notable difference between online learning and school - based learning is the flexibility of time and place. For everyone, the situation of CoVid 19 pandemic is complicated and almost students is studying at home. The best benefit is that students can limit their exposure and prevent illness for themselves. using online learning methods, you will promote the spirit of initiative and creativity. At the same time, you will have many opportunities to use different sources of knowledge at a low-cost. Through that, students will have the same amount of knowledge as when studying at school.
However, studying online students is not effective. In my opinion, the online learning method is not the best way for current students. With studying online , create a sense of destruction and distraction. students also can ben easily distracted by social media or other websites. Furthermore, an important challenge of this learning is the use of the internet. Without a consistent connection for all students in learning as well as is affecting students and harmful to education.
students are also prone to some unnecessary diseases. studying online exposes students to a lot of screens, you will be prone to some diseases related to your eyes. In addition, to psychological issues, students will be under pressure from lectures. most of the homework is an important thing for students but the amount knowledge to meet and too much homework will put pressure on students in many ways.
students will probably absorb almost enough of the knowledge pretend by the instructor. However, in the online classroom, there is very little interaction between students and teachers. this creates a feeling of isolation. this leads to students' lack of communication methods in society.
In short, learning is the need and desire of students. students should be identify the benefits of learning methods to have quantity learning plan,ideal for themselves. Make the correct decisions to study and supplement knowledge and skills for yourself most conveniently and effectively.
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- It is better for students to study from home rather than going to school Do you agree or diagree with statement 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, i think, in addition, in short, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3918128655 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00913518101 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514619883041 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7202586481 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.8333333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22247224343 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694242220209 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441326916595 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126163722217 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416568762573 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.