The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles.

The provided diagram illustrates a detailed procedure of how plastic bottles are recycled.

Overall, a total of nine steps are involved in the process of reusing plastic bottles. Everything starts out with these bottles being got rid of and culminates when it ends up in other forms of products.

At the initial stage, the thrown-away bottles are gathered before being transported to the recycling center, where recyclable ones will be separated from the others. Once they are sorted out, they are compressed into cubes and smashed into a lot of small pieces, which are then immediately cleansed in a water tank placed right below the crusher.

In the next stage, pieces of plastic bottles are transformed into pellets. Subsequently, they are heated to create raw materials before being packed. Having experienced all the previous stages, these basic materials are used to manufacture end products such as shirts, bags, pens, etc. Then, the process is reiterated.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27741935484 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69384004602 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690322580645 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8176001583 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8888888889 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261630702125 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983747322888 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757502907347 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149747797357 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506659821031 0.0819641961636 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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