The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This graph provides the trends of people aged 65 and beyond within the years, 1940 and 2040 in three different nations.
Looking from all perspectives, it is readily apparent that the graph has shown an upward trend in all provided countries. Apparently, it is the USA who has got the highest figure of 65 years old people in 1940, showing at almost 10% and it is followed by Sweden and Japan respectively. However, the table has turned in 2000 and beyond, whereby the population of Sweden outnumbered that of the US and reached its first peak at 20%. Surprisingly, the number of 65-year old Japanese will exceed the rest of the countries in the future, precisely in 2030, with its percentage at 22%. By the end of the prediction, in 2040, Japan, the country with the lowest oldest people at the start of the survey, will likely stand at the first place, covering more than a quarter of its entire population whilst Sweden only has its quarter and the US has covered merely around 23% of its people.
To sum up, despite having the upward trends, the countries that convey the highest figures are different, depicting the fact that Japan, which was once the country with the least people in their 60s, has a tendency to be the country with the highest number in 2040 while the figures for Sweden and the USA seem smaller although they have increasing numbers in their respective countries.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'lowest the oldest'.
Suggestion: lowest the oldest
...n, in 2040, Japan, the country with the lowest oldest people at the start of the survey, will...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, look, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71721311475 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45341917625 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.0110537854 43.030603864 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.428571429 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8571428571 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139454879563 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732298113697 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660203318139 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123717127761 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762412111553 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'lowest the oldest'.
Suggestion: lowest the oldest
...n, in 2040, Japan, the country with the lowest oldest people at the start of the survey, will...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, look, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71721311475 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45341917625 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.0110537854 43.030603864 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.428571429 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8571428571 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139454879563 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732298113697 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660203318139 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123717127761 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762412111553 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.