The maps give information about a university sports court.
Given are the two maps depicting the changes in the layout of a university sports court during a course of time, commencing from 1990 to now.
Conspicuously, there have been myriad modifications, yet the most perspicuous difference is the appearance of the building accommodating almost all amenities of the court..
Currently, this area witnesses myriad obvious changes, one of those differences is that the middle and east parts are combined into a big complex with walls ringing around. In 1990, there was a reception in the middle of the map which divided the area into 2 main parts: the east part and the west part. Strikingly, the cafe shop and the changing room were to its north and south in turn, meanwhile, the outdoor pool was to its northeast. After a period of transformations, there is no change in the location and size of the reception, cafe shop and the old outdoor swimming pool which is used indoors. Conversely, the old tennis court is knocked down to give room for the fitness center and the changing room that is enlarged and moved eastwards.
Moving westward, the old park on the north is used to build a basketball court and the car park on the south is removed to give space for the big tennis court which is currently double in numbers.
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...dating almost all amenities of the court.. Currently, this area witnesses myriad...
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...those differences is that the middle and east parts are combined into a big compl...
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...and size of the reception, cafe shop and the old outdoor swimming pool which is u...
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...s court is knocked down to give room for the fitness center and the changing room...
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... and moved eastwards. Moving westward, the old park on the north is used to bui...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72850678733 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71604049774 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556561085973 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 21.760055147 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.625 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173740658924 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707036186208 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780857039455 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118593032045 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765426501285 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.