A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Both the authorities and private organizations have the same significant influence on social infrastructure and service in the community. While there is a school of thought that defence and city structures should be provided by the government, I believe that other services should be invested by individuals or non-government units.
On the one hand, there is no denying that the authorities play a crucial role in providing defence and muniticipant fabrics. By all accounts, politicians who process deeper knowledge and wider visions than almost normal ordinary people in society are able to make intelligent decisions in order to boost the national development and defence capacity. In terms of diplomacy and military, wise politicians could figure out the best way so that the national boundary would be kept safe in front of any enemy. Furthermore, the governments are capable of using national budgets for social investments in urban infrastructure like housing and road expansion. For example, by funding from local authorities, fabrics would become unique and systematic, which also makes citizens living in particular areas beneficial.
However, I personally recognize that there are many reasons why private groups and individuals should invest in other social services. Firstly, they are more likely to be sensitive towards the latest tendencies in the community, which creates more successful opportunities for them to gain profits. Thanks to the investments of private individuals and groups, more services and activities that are beneficial to citizens are established, more recreation and leisure that people could gain are created. According to the national survey about quality of social infrastructure, the complexes built or owned by private units tend to be used and organized better than the ones that governments directly manage. Moreover, private individuals and organizations would remarkably contribute taxes and renueve for the local authorities, which could not only reduce economic burden for the governments, but also create an encouraging environment for business.
In conclusion, the authorities should ensure the national defence and urban fabric in order to create uniqueness and safety for their citizens. In my opinion, the other organizations should contribute to other services so that people find them more beneficial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64507042254 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0933451103 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557746478873 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9395329869 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.142857143 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268154374326 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935279984158 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699986120194 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176675481793 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776046268557 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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