The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and
behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for
modern life.
It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs
of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful
and should not be forgotten.
On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for
younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life,
but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’
around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry.
But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles.
The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary
or appropriate by most younger people.
On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For
example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s
work, and these behaviors can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. Other
characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalized world,
young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more
important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally, I believe that young people would lead happier lives if
they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighborliness.
In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we
should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.
- The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live think and behave However some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life 73
- The course you want to take is full and the admission office ask you to take the other one You are writing an email to the dean office and explain your situation You should mention why you want to that class What do you think about the other class 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 19, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'younger' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: younger
...ccepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people. On the other hand, some trad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3389261745 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85635920228 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577181208054 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5017629468 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.384615385 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321323904618 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105522176015 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681730813106 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860935518577 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658944659952 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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