Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad, Discuss both views and state your opinion.
There are lots of people believing that a country should seize the opportunity to hold an international sports event, while others think the kind of event causes trouble rather than brings about benefits. In my opinion, I’m more inclined towards the former than the latter and I will depict my viewpoint in the essay below.
On the one hand, it is no doubt that a country has to deal with plenty of problems related to infrastructure and residents' security if they want to organize sports events. Firstly, there are going to be full of foreign people all over the world arriving to support their favorite athletes or soccer teams. Therefore, it has difficulties in protecting local safety and tourists' property from thieves or burglaries by dint of the administration overload when they are totally responsible for all sections in a prestigious event. Secondly, the local power takes charge of meeting the tourists’ demand of accommodations. As the result, they are under pressure because they have to prepare qualified hostel and services to impress visitors about the nation’s image.
On the other hand, the country can impress the foreign tourists with their national images such as traditional cuisine, festival or costume by advertisement and relative service. After that, the visitors would obtain some intrinsic interests in the country’s tradition and that makes them expect to visit the country again in the future. As a result, if the nation can take advantage of a host in an international event to promote the economy of their country, it exerts a large number of positive impacts on national finance, budget and the unemployment rate as well. Moreover, I think that organizing a famous sports event helps people be aware of the necessity of sports if they want to boost their health or prevent them from dangerous diseases including cancer, heart attack, …
In conclusion, honestly, the situation includes both sites, benefits and drawbacks. However, I believe it is better for the country if they conduct an international occasion as well as a sports event.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...the economy of their country, it exerts a large number of positive impacts on national finance, b...
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Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...eover, I think that organizing a famous sports event helps people be aware of the nece...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... an international occasion as well as a sports event.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, honestly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, i think, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13823529412 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81724023835 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591176470588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3936437514 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.583333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.5833333333 7.06120827912 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261239072102 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809763067048 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789620951695 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158410027643 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576052846724 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.