Some people believe that there should b fixed punishments for each type of crome. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
I partially agree with the first statement of argument that for each type of offence, there should be fixed punishment. But, as other fellows acquisce that, for crime, few parameters should be considered before making decision of punishment.
First of all, if the crime is too serious such as murder, extortion, rape, corruption, terrorist attack or drug trafficking then every miscreant involved in crime should be punished and there should be firm punishments for each type of crime if its one of the above. Because these kind of crimes led to risk of lives of victims likely physical and mental disturbance or sometimes deaths. No one has right to play with anyone's life and if he or she does, such criminal should have a rigorous imprisonment or sentence to death.
On the other hand, the crimes on small extent including breaching rules and regulations regarding driving, environmental and pollution related tenets concocted by government or burglary should be punished by means of jail for a short time period or by making acuse to pay a fine. There should not be punishment for crimes commited undeliberately. For instance, someone comes in front of a running car to suicide, its not the mistake of car driver. But, of course, he should have proof that he did not hit the person deliberately as an evidence that its not a planned car accident.
In conclusion, punishments are totally depend on type of crime whether its a serious crime or breaking some minor rules and regulations of government. If its deleterious then the rogue should be jailed. If its not too detrimental then acused should set free or make him pay fine. But in any case, proof is the crucial thing to decide whether acuse should be punished or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... crime if its one of the above. Because these kind of crimes led to risk of lives of victi...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s in front of a running car to suicide, its not the mistake of car driver. But, of ...
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Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... In conclusion, punishments are totally depend on type of crime whether its a serious ...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...totally depend on type of crime whether its a serious crime or breaking some minor ...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...or rules and regulations of government. If its deleterious then the rogue should b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as, first of all, in any case, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88474576271 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74993196751 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1391754752 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365516660425 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146690539805 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109804742693 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234377355722 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210783437591 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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