Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that due to the disparate qualities, some occupations required men while others should belong to women. In my perspective, I strongly disagree with this view since gender equality could bring a benefit from the sustainable development.
On the one hand, the gender discrimination in job seekers brings a huge advantage to the employers. Firstly, this can ensure work efficiency in terms of qualities. In fact, there are some jobs that have tons of workload every day so men who have better physical strength and endurance could prevail since they can shorten the working hours and assert the quality of their assignments, reducing the errors and costs during work shifts and improving company’s revenue. For instance, in Vietnam, the construction workers may belong to stronger gender since women do not have sufficient strength to maintain it in a long period. Thus, the gender disparity is beneficial in terms of costs and revenue.
On the other hand, the equality in occupation needs to be concerned due to several reasons. Firstly, both genders could have an outstanding performance in particular jobs that may unsuitable for them. As a matter of the fact, women recently have proven the role in the community since their dedication in many aspects is inevitable. For instance, the German president Angela Merkel is the visible evidence for a proof that weaker gender can successfully participate in politics and even a leader of a nation that previously requires men. Therefore, the fairness of occupations facilitates these people to devote their knowledge and qualifications into their careers, improving career prospects and ensuring the sustainable development of society.
In conclusion, despite different qualities, men and women should be treated equally in jobs since the benefits from the sustainable development of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37328767123 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9551818133 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5738400295 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.692307692 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241394801196 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755587545195 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627605115566 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149381447571 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133596664661 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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