Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no disguising the fact that people of all times have been looking high and low for the elixir of success as it is a stepping stone of every single aspect of life. There is not a one-size-fits-all method to be successful; while many people believe that successful people are adventurous and risk-takers, I am of the opinion that successful people are those ones who do activities that they know how to perform them in the best way possible. The reasons, including but not limited to the following, substantiate my viewpoint.
To begin with, having a good command of something that a person has been doing for years will make the person confident. To be more specific, although it is true that being adventurous will make the person have the joy of one's life, it will not guarantee success. On the other hand, successful people are conservative, watching out their steps and measures. In this vein, since successful people know how to do something to the best way possible, every step they take is taken confidently. As an illustration, my brother, a successful business person, is completely confident about every single step he takes since he he does what he is good at. When being offered to take risk and contract with a whole new company, he refused, mentioning that taking risk is not his option.
The next reason worthy of note is that successful people invest on what they know because they are realistic people and will not put all their eggs in one basket. To put it in other words, successful people will not fantasize further success, and hence they live with the realities. They are completely aware of failure and in order to avoid failure, they think, decide, and take steps about actual things. For instance, my boss who is a millionaire shareholder knows exactly what he wants based on sound and logical thinking not based on hunches and dreams. Once he was suggested to participate in stock marketing, however, he knew that such action is risky and it was not his style to take risks on such uncertain activities. Instead, he invested on a market he had knew every detail of which leading him to more success.
To recap, taken the above mentioned reasons and examples into account, it can be stated that successful people do not take risks rather do what they know how to do since they are more confident in that way. Moreover, they do not fantasize the future, they take real actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 360, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'those' instead.
Suggestion: those
... the opinion that successful people are those ones who do activities that they know how to...
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Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...us will make the person have the joy of ones life, it will not guarantee success. On...
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Line 2, column 615, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: he
... about every single step he takes since he he does what he is good at. When being off...
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Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "wants based" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'basing' or 'to be based'.
Suggestion: basing; to be based
...shareholder knows exactly what he wants based on sound and logical thinking not based...
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Line 3, column 768, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...Instead, he invested on a market he had knew every detail of which leading him to mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for instance, in other words, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73871733967 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63942625207 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498812351544 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2444037309 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.352941176 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7647058824 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299656923839 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105716892111 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990160217388 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222860856885 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10509801927 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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