As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Businesses always try to make profits, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligations of companies. I completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society more than simply make money.
On the one hand, It is obliviously true that maximizing profits is an essential target of any company. Healthy finance ensures the companies could cover their running costs such as building rental fees, employees’ salaries and equipment payments. On top of that, a strong budget helps companies ready to invest in marketing strategies or product development when dealing with any sudden changes in consumer market trends. If they do not have enough money to meet new trends in customers’ demands, they might lose their market share to opponents and it is harmful to the sustainable survival of any company.
On the other hand, I side with those who concur that companies should realize that they have a wider role to play in society. Companies’ owners and managers should treat their workers well rather than solely exploiting them as much as possible. The businesses could have financial supports for their staff such as travelling aids or living costs. It, therefore, helps their workers have a better quality of life and in this way directly improve society’s quality. Caring about the well-being of employees might strengthen their dedication to the company, which is an important part of contributing to the success of any business.
In conclusion, there are many convincing reasons to understand why companies give an enormous effort to make profits. However, I believe that they should pay enough attention to social distribution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24264705882 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7823183526 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639705882353 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1891473113 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.692307692 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163394048171 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546265021762 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529768904688 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10411582475 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698717716985 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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