Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
It is true that technologies have had a great influence on relationships between people. Technology affects humans in various ways, and in my opinion, this has both positive and negative effects.
Technology has a huge impact on education and social life. Firstly, education has witnessed an enormous change in terms of relationships between students and teachers since the advent of some new technology. Video lectures and online courses are now very popular in the Internet help students in many countries can easily to enroll without any offline classes. Secondly, technology also has changed the way people interact with others in the contemporary world. Services like Skype or Facebook allow people do not find it difficult to make new friends who share common interests with them.
The development of technology has both positive and negative sides because of two main reasons. Firstly, novel communication technology results in the cooperation between people around the world easier than when it is almost limited by writing letters. Email, phone and video calls could help people connect with others as good as face-to-face meeting, and many of us benefit from these either in work or personal relationships. Secondly, the surge of virtual social networks might make many young people choose to live in online society rather than real interactions. This is a poor substitute for real friendships because we do not know the real personality of someone through their activities on Facebook or Twitter.
In conclusion, technology has influenced human lives in many aspects. It certainly has positive contributions to the development of our civilization, but although has negative effects in relationships between people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43494423792 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93854825558 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5841918589 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.428571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397247550041 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123627145474 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898118869715 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216293721265 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274955249697 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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