The best way to ensure the growth of children is tomake parents take parenting courses Do you agree or disagree

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The best way to ensure the growth of children is tomake parents take parenting courses. Do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by littledng on Sun, 11/21/2021 - 00:24

The general view has been that parents should be made to take parenting courses in order to guarantee the best development of their children. Although these courses can be useful, especially for first-time parents, I disagree that they should be mandated. with this idea and the reasons will be outlined in this essay.

First of all, despite preparation for each growth stage of the children from parenting classes, parents instinctively know how to hold and care for their child as soon as it is born. That means they are aware of what is good and bad for the kids. In fact, there is no ideal method of raising a baby due to the differences in the families' situations. Furthermore, either the circumstance or the child is analysed by experts however, only parents can understand them, because specialists never truly grasp their individual characteristics, compared to their mothers and fathers.

In addition, instead of following something bringing about a business model in to the relationship between parents and children, parents can learn how to natuarally bring up a kid. That mothers and fathers spend time with their kids is significantly better than participating in these kind of classes. In particular, some people have experiences in parenting based on their own upbringing and cultural influence. As a result, people should be free to attend parenting courses rather than forcing them to do so.

In conclusion, although it can not be denied that there are advantages of parenting classes, as far as I concerned it should be up to the parents to make their decisions to enroll in such cources.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...nificantly better than participating in these kind of classes. In particular, some people ...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, kind of, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97718631179 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81276832152 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3744578169 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6363636364 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256321406138 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936602309126 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893735687737 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162675866015 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521902791274 0.056905535591 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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