Some people prefer to live in small family units, while others think it is better to live in large family groups. Discuss both of views and give your opinion?
Home is the most important part of life and while many people dream of a small family, others prefer a large family with full members. In my opinion, small family has advantages over large family economically and emotionally, therefore I lean towards a small family unit instead of a large family group.
Financial issues are the first thing people living in a large family have to take into account. As the world develops, the cost of living increases. This leads to people, especially those who are economically disadvantaged. If those people have a lot of children or other relatives to take care of, they will be under great pressure for money. They have to work hard doing anything to earn money including illegal work. In contrast to small families, the cost of living will be lower because they do not spend much, so the standard of living for their children will be higher than that of other families, leading to inequality for children in large families feel unconfidence or guilt.
A large family will make it difficult for family members to express their feelings, if the family has many children, there will be a lack of attention from parents because their not sensitive enough as well as caring. Having children from there will be competition leading to the children falling into depression. If the family has few children, their parents will take care of them and give them more attention.
In conclusion, large family groups have some of the limitations mentioned above and in my opinion small family units are the better choice.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89733840304 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55758188829 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536121673004 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0848358573 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370157342986 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140490126727 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121768886164 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263262227081 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118734891907 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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