Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
It is widely argued that the responsibility of conducting and managing scientific research should be by the governments, not by private enterprises. While I accept that this perception is somewhat justifiable, I believe that it would bestow enormous benefits if scientific research are conducted by private companies based on some reasons discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, the option of leading the governments performing research may have potential benefits for society as a whole. Firstly, with the concerns of society such as pandemics or global warming, it is easier for the governments to deal with based on their responsibility to resident’s rights. For example, the COVID pandemics cost a high amount of spending to find the vaccine to fight viruses for the safety of people, therefore it can only be addressed by the governments this problem by using the national budget and taking advantage of collaboration between countries. Secondly, scientific research controlled by governments will ensure reliability and minimize the risk of using them for criminal activity. For instance, numerous scientific research related to weapons must be managed by governmental organizations if the country does not want to be affected by terrorism or warfare.
On the other hand, there are myriads of compelling reasons as I am convinced that private companies should have opportunities to conduct research. One reason is that enterprises researching on the behalf of commercial interests are likely to have the motivation to conduct research more quickly and more efficiently. Tesla, for example, has been carrying out numerous researches to produce cars and bring them to the market. Secondly, private companies tend to use young labor to perform all of the research, therefore they will have numerous creative ideas and have great inventions. In terms of researching medicines, private enterprises have many approaches to find remedies or treatments to cure cancer or some fatal diseases.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable that leading governments carrying out research can help residents from being affected by societal concerns or the risk of warfare, I would contend that scientific research should be responsible for private enterprises.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51008645533 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10546245363 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524495677233 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.335764029 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.076923077 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302989425132 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119023571917 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720482571262 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208554876768 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551510191652 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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