People buy a product if it fulfills their needs there is no need for advertisement To what extent do you agree or disagree with it

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People buy a product if it fulfills their needs; there is no need for advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

In contemporary settings, more people become shopaholic. Therefore, by followed this, if any product which is purchased by masses become able to complete their necessities. Hence, advertisements become non-essential. I completely disagree with this notion due to numerous reasons and these are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in present decades, advertisements become prominent factor in all sectors to proliferate their popularity and production especially in business sections which includes industrialisation, marketing, shops and so on. Therefore, there is huge necessity of advertisements in public. Hence, there are plenty of reasons which are in favour of this criteria. First and foremost is presentation of novel products. In this notion, if any product is launch in market which is related to necessities of public. Thus, advertising becomes more favourable method to become in contact with individuals regards that novel item. Hence, they provide whole discription about that product which includes their price, quality, quantity and brand so on. As a result, this become beneficial to individuals due to which they become aware from such products.
Moreover, another factor leads toward aid in form of advertisement. Because, there are plethora of advertisements which includes necessities of daily routine such as washing powders, toilet washers and groceries so on. In such ways, there is huge variety in front of public via advertise. Hence, they become able to choose in accordance to their preferability and affordable price. For instance, there is huge variety in washing powders with quality brands and also lower and higher prices with quantity in grams. Hence, this becomes aidful to individuals because, they become in contact with such useful information. Due to which, they afford these products according to their need and budget to.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that, advertisements play crucial role in modern era in plethora of aspects such as provide information regards novel objects and to represent huge variety to public.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...lenty of reasons which are in favour of this criteria. First and foremost is present...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61392405063 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09968960203 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522151898734 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8824060816 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145457266141 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474402487801 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405307544109 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893751854167 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382073156394 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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