The graph show the percentage of people aged over 60 in Canada, Finland and Korea between 1950 and 2050.
The line graph illustrate percentage of population aged over 60 years in three countries korea, canada and Finland from 1950 to current year and also projects the population percentage until year 2050.
It is clear from the line graph that in all three nations, the percentage population of sixty years old people has continously grown from year 1950 and will continue to increase until year 2050. In year 1950, canada had most aged population compare to other two countries and korea had lowest population over 60 years of age. Interestingly, according to projection, korea will take the first spot and canada will be at third position in year 2050.
In 1950, korea had only 5% of population aged above 60 years of age and there is slight decrease in the population until 1980 when korea had approximately 3% of population over 60 years of age. Although from 1980 to 2020, there is gradual increment making almost one tenth of population age 60 plus in year 2020, there will be significant increase in the population making just below one third of the country population eventually in year 2050.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
...ompare to other two countries and korea had lowest population over 60 years of age. Intere...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will be at third position in year 2050. In 1950, korea had only 5% of population...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89839572193 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62760093125 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459893048128 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.1087670802 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.666666667 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307821058727 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193740156233 0.103423049105 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992408318462 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270876458619 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756874670324 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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