Write an essay of about 350 words on the following topic.
"Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspaper and TV has bad influences, so this kind of information should be restricted on the media."
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is thought that describing the detailed crime on newspapers and TV has converse effects, thus this type of information should be banned instead of publishing. I totally agree with this opinion because of the following reasons.
An obvious reason for this is that restricting the detail of criminal descriptions helps to reduce the rate of juvenile crime. Children are curious about everything, such as the process of committing crimes. If there is no description of crimes in the media, it may not negatively influence adolescents. So that, they do not obtain any ideas about crime actings and the proportion of juvenile delinquency gradually declines.
Another reason for not showing the detailed crimes on the media is that it might be a pushed factor for governments and police to have more difficulties in addressing the offenses in communities. By reading the news, the criminals know how others were captured by police and transferred the illegal packages, so they could change the way committing to avoid police. An illustration of this is that when the criminals transfer heroine to the whole country, they can avoid police investigation by hiding this item in their tummies. This is because they have seen this way in a newspaper and imitated it.
Not only that, banning the detailed process of committing could make victims freer. Because of the well-looking rating, the media could do anything to attract audiences, even harm those who are suffered terrible things from the criminals. That would make casualties be scared of everyone and just want to be at their own home.
In conclusion, think that it should have an obligation to show the right guidance about criminal description for the public on TV or newspaper, rather than highlighting the detail of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09931506849 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84518561076 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5672714645 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.357142857 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317806526918 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10309240513 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634493657851 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17206844656 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660294716048 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.